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雅思作文之 Tourist Attraction

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在准备雅思考试的时候,同学们在反复练习剑桥雅思官方教材的同时,也应该在临近考试前多加练习各大网站上的预测。拿大作文写作来说,每次考试基本包含30多道重点预测。所以如果我们在考前能够尽可能多的 cover 这些预测,一来考试时我们会更加安心,二来一旦考题和预测题相似,我们写作的顺畅度就会大大提高。


下面就是一道8月大作文的预测题:

Question: Some people think that cultural traditions will be destroyed if they are used as money-making attractions aimed at tourists. Others, however, believe that this is a way to save these traditions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Ideas for the 1st view:

  1. Too many tourists traveling to attractions will make it hard to protect cultural traditions, because of cultural conflicts.

  2. A increasing number of shops and hotels near cultural attractions would bring a strong commercial atmosphere, which is harmful for local traditions to maintain its original appearance.

  3. Too many restaurants and traffics might lead to air and water pollutions which would damage the natural environment, and this is harmful for preserving the cultural traditions.


Ideas for the 2nd view:

  1. Popular tourist attractions would attract more people to learn and understand the local cultures which would help to preserve these traditions.

  2. The prosperity of tourist industry could result in more job opportunities and an increase in local people’s revenues, which would make them value more about their cultural traditions.

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作为一道 discuss both views 的题,我们在分别讨论两个观点的同事还必须明确清晰地表达出自己的观点。 所以我们可以在introduction里就表明自己的position,接着在Body1里描述 some people's view 作为让步段,然后在Body2里声明自己的观点。最后在conclusion里重申introduction的position作为结尾。

很多同学没有两个idea就写不完一个body paragraph,这在无形中给他们心理上造成了压力。所以我们平时要让自己在即使只有一个Idea的前提下也能流畅地写好。这里作为示范,我们只用一个idea写一段Body2。


Body2:

However, in my view, the prosperity of tourist attractions would help to preserve cultural traditions, because local people would value more about their culture if tourism brings them higher revenues. Compared with traditions being kept isolated from the outside world, tourist industries based on local traditions would give the natives more job opportunities, such as those in hotels or restaurants, and thereby an increase in their revenues. This, in my opinion, would make the local value more about their own cultures. Therefore, I can imagine that more effort would be put in the preservation of the original customs, because the traditions, in this case, are not only about their cultural identities, but also a way of seeking better a living condition for the natives.


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