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雅思作文之 ambition and success

雅思作文中我们会遇到这样的情况,就是题目中提的两个问题非常相近,所以回答起来重复程度可能会很高,这样势必会影响我们的得分。因此,我们要学会细分我们的ideas。运用反证,举例等多种手法使文章清晰有不重复。今天就为大家带来这样一篇文章的解析。


Question: Do you think how important it is for people to want success in life? Is ambition a positive or negative characteristic?

 

People may often argue about whether it is important for them to want be successful in their lives and if ambition is a positive personality. In my view, I think it is significant for us to have a desire for success and ambition is a decent characteristic.

 

As far as I am concerned, seeking success is important for people’s lives, because it is the starting point for them to improve their talents. In my view, although individuals are born differently with gifts in various fields, it is the desire of being successful that pushes them to make the decision of commencing improving their abilities. If they did not consider success as a valuable thing, their gifts would be much limited for further development, and our society would see far less scientists, musicians and entrepreneurs for the future generations.

 

Furthermore, I believe, ambition is definitely a positive characteristic, for it helps to develop other important personalities. In order for people to keep an ambition throughout their lives, they need to be perseverance enough, because ambition may be easily defeated if they could not withstand the depression of failures.  In addition, an ambition could never be realized if people do not have good planning habits. For example, I think students who achieve High Distinction Level in universities are usually those who are able to planning their studying and rest time well.

 

In conclusion, I personally believe that it is significant for people to want to be successful, and having an ambition is definitely a good thing.